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<<Henry crouched beside a bush on the riverbank [as] the sun slipped down between the two peaks. It would be dark soon. The crisp fall air numbed his cheeks and knuckles. Hiding here was cowardly, but they’d be waiting for him at home! Behind him, pebbles crunched under car wheels. He wasn’t alone.>>
Don’t Distance Your Readers by Leaving Your Subtitles Turned On
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Elizabeth Erlandson
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Totally sold out to Jesus Christ, in Whom I find ever-increasing joy. Wife to Doug. Mother of two. Urban gleaner. Retired candy store owner. Devotional writer.
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